I like the way you described how the woman and her brother described the Samyuzot. At first, she pities him and doesn't want her younger brother to kill him, but once the exile must choose between his own life and her brother's life, all pity is gone. That is very human.
Also, you did a good job showing how the brother longed to prove him…
I like the way you described how the woman and her brother described the Samyuzot. At first, she pities him and doesn't want her younger brother to kill him, but once the exile must choose between his own life and her brother's life, all pity is gone. That is very human.
Also, you did a good job showing how the brother longed to prove himself and to fight. And as soon as he found that the exile had stolen his knife, he was freed to act on that longing without bringing the anger of the gods down on him.
I like the way you described how the woman and her brother described the Samyuzot. At first, she pities him and doesn't want her younger brother to kill him, but once the exile must choose between his own life and her brother's life, all pity is gone. That is very human.
Also, you did a good job showing how the brother longed to prove himself and to fight. And as soon as he found that the exile had stolen his knife, he was freed to act on that longing without bringing the anger of the gods down on him.